Good shading in the hand. But the over all color scheme is alittle too blah, lots of empty space. Also the yellow and the hand are almost the same color. But good job.
concept was really good. should have enlarged the hand to full almost life size, because there was too much wasted space. i also think the color scheme was boring, bringer eye catching colors could have wored better
i don't know what the subject is. and i feel like there needs to be more distinction between the hand and the background and i agree that there is a little too much empty place.
this is very interesting and different. i like the hand, but maybe it could have been a little bigger and more detailed so it grabs attention. nice work though!
I don't know why but I like it. Way too much empty space though if you had the hand pouring the things into something, like a bucket or basket of even on the floor it could have helped you with that. I love the hand, you can actually tell it is dropping something ...cool
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Good shading in the hand. But the over all color scheme is alittle too blah, lots of empty space. Also the yellow and the hand are almost the same color. But good job.
concept was really good. should have enlarged the hand to full almost life size, because there was too much wasted space. i also think the color scheme was boring, bringer eye catching colors could have wored better
I feel like the hand could have been a little larger but i like your subject.
i don't know what the subject is. and i feel like there needs to be more distinction between the hand and the background and i agree that there is a little too much empty place.
I feel like it looks unfinished. Not sure what the concept is
this is very interesting and different. i like the hand, but maybe it could have been a little bigger and more detailed so it grabs attention. nice work though!
i do not think this piece is your full potential. what is there is good but more can be portrayed. overall i didn't really like it.
the colors need to be bolder. everything sort of blends.but the idea is good
too much empty space
there was a lot of emptiness in the page. and i dont know if thats candy or pills?
I don't know why but I like it. Way too much empty space though if you had the hand pouring the things into something, like a bucket or basket of even on the floor it could have helped you with that. I love the hand, you can actually tell it is dropping something ...cool
Where is your Second Piece, I saw you put it in the art room ? It looked so cool?
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