This needs to be darkened, or the contrast made greater; otherwise this is great. The physical shapes were nicely drawn, and the arrangement of books piled on top of each other is very reminiscent of school.
your concentration is very interesting, i like how you contrast your original culture with the one you are brought into. it really shows how no one is one dementional
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I feel like the drawing could have been much more dark. I like your concept. Nice job!
i love this when i look it up close, but otherwise its hard to make out the details because the shading is so light
I think it's shaded too lightly, I wish it was darker
This needs to be darkened, or the contrast made greater; otherwise this is great. The physical shapes were nicely drawn, and the arrangement of books piled on top of each other is very reminiscent of school.
Its hard to tell what it is not unless you look up close. I like your subject though!
i love your topic- great idea! don't be afraid to go darker so it's easier to tell what your drawing is depicting. good job!
your concentration topic is real interesting!!! don't be affraid to go darker and bolder. but other than that the actual shape drawing is nice
needs to be darker but i like it
your concentration is very interesting, i like how you contrast your original culture with the one you are brought into. it really shows how no one is one dementional
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