i dont understand the theme, i feel like u rushed this piece. i have to agree with the other two posts about the shadow shape, i'm not sure where it is.
This piece needs to be cleaned up. I do not understand the theme. I am not exactly sure, the them. The brown in the middle confuses me. Your piece needs to be thought through a bit more. But great effort :D
I think the theme is seasons, but I could be wrong, and if it is, I really like the theme. I think it would have been really cool if you did the seasons in the opposite colors they were supposed to be like do the winter yellow and the summer blue or something, but when I look at it I see the spring, summer, fall, winter. I like the setup of the boxes, but I agree with the people that posted for me, it needs to be cleaned up, but you could have just hated using gauche or ran out of time which is understandable. :P
I don't really understand what you meant for a theme. Do you have a shadow shape? I think the boxes also could have been arranged a bit more creatively, rather than just in straight lines.
i dont really under stand your theme, or see a shadow shape. this piece looks a bit rushed too. and i agree that the boxes should have been places more creatively rather than in just a straight line.
Individually each line is good, but I dont see how they connect to each other. I especially like the last row and the style you used there, maybe you could have carried that style into your other rows
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i dont understand the theme of this piece.
i think it has mismatched colors.
and i cant find the shadow shape.
the colors are a good idea, they just could of worked better with one another, i agree that i also can't find the shadow shape
i dont understand the theme, i feel like u rushed this piece. i have to agree with the other two posts about the shadow shape, i'm not sure where it is.
This piece needs to be cleaned up. I do not understand the theme. I am not exactly sure, the them. The brown in the middle confuses me. Your piece needs to be thought through a bit more. But great effort :D
I think the theme is seasons, but I could be wrong, and if it is, I really like the theme. I think it would have been really cool if you did the seasons in the opposite colors they were supposed to be like do the winter yellow and the summer blue or something, but when I look at it I see the spring, summer, fall, winter. I like the setup of the boxes, but I agree with the people that posted for me, it needs to be cleaned up, but you could have just hated using gauche or ran out of time which is understandable. :P
I don't really understand what you meant for a theme. Do you have a shadow shape? I think the boxes also could have been arranged a bit more creatively, rather than just in straight lines.
i dont get what the theme is here and i can not find the shadow shape. but i like your colors
i dont really under stand your theme, or see a shadow shape. this piece looks a bit rushed too. and i agree that the boxes should have been places more creatively rather than in just a straight line.
Individually each line is good, but I dont see how they connect to each other. I especially like the last row and the style you used there, maybe you could have carried that style into your other rows
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