Chopsticks are a traditional Korean utensil. I wanted to show how to hold them
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The first thing I noticed before I even opened the comment box was how awesome the hand was- they are very tricky to do and you drew it wonderfully. The edge of the palm appears strange, however, hands are strange themselves and I don't think you could have drawn the rest of it so well and then messed up the palm, so that must be what the palm originally looked like. This is a very good piece, especially because of the chopsticks and the noodles. The food to the right of the noodles kind of looks unclear- I think more contrast in the shading would make the texture distinct. On the whole, this is a great piece.
your use of pencil is soo detailed when it came to the hand and chop sticks!! those two aspects of the piece are my favorate the hand it the main focus and really catch my eye. but i felt once i got to the actual bowl it was all a blur and unclear. but all around it is a great piece
your hand and chopsticks are very well done! the noodle wrapped around the end looks perfect. perhaps your values could have been a bit darker just so the drawing is clearer, but other than that i think it's a great piece.
the hand and the noodles are not particularly my favorite ..the lines in the hand are a little dark and dramatic. the chopsticks look great and i think it was really cool that you portrayed this culture in your art.
Chopsticks are a traditional Korean utensil. I wanted to show how to hold them
7 comments:
The first thing I noticed before I even opened the comment box was how awesome the hand was- they are very tricky to do and you drew it wonderfully. The edge of the palm appears strange, however, hands are strange themselves and I don't think you could have drawn the rest of it so well and then messed up the palm, so that must be what the palm originally looked like. This is a very good piece, especially because of the chopsticks and the noodles. The food to the right of the noodles kind of looks unclear- I think more contrast in the shading would make the texture distinct. On the whole, this is a great piece.
your use of pencil is soo detailed when it came to the hand and chop sticks!! those two aspects of the piece are my favorate the hand it the main focus and really catch my eye. but i felt once i got to the actual bowl it was all a blur and unclear. but all around it is a great piece
i love your details, but they are kinda hard to see unless you look up close. it might have help if it was darker
The hand holding the chop sticks is done very well. The shading in the noodles could have been a little sharper. Great idea!
your hand and chopsticks are very well done! the noodle wrapped around the end looks perfect. perhaps your values could have been a bit darker just so the drawing is clearer, but other than that i think it's a great piece.
i like that the emphasis is the hand and chopsticks. the rest kind of blends out, i like it it looks cool
the hand and the noodles are not particularly my favorite ..the lines in the hand are a little dark and dramatic. the chopsticks look great and i think it was really cool that you portrayed this culture in your art.
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