Saturday, September 27, 2008

First piece of the year



Cailtin Cawley

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Cool picture. Is the nose too big? I wonder if a smaller nose would bring out the teeth more?

Anonymous said...

I love the subject. Really a very cool choice. The shading is excellent. The only thing I could change is the contrast. Aroung the nose and in the mouth its amazing, good use of light and dark values. but in the dongs body its alot of gray. I think this mught be why the nose seems larger to anonumous, it sticks out more because it has more contrast.

Anonymous said...

I love the fact that you not only chose a dog as your picture but chose a unique emotion. Everything is great but i think the nose is a little large.

Anonymous said...

the image is what really makes the picture, you also did a really good job on getting the emotion across. i believe the reason why the nose is looking soo large is the harsh shading everything else is all in lower shades and grays the nose is the only contrast of darker values.

Anonymous said...

i love it! i think that the shading could've been a little darker but overall i think you really captured your sucject...i also really liked the hand in the actual picture, but thats just because i'm baised haha

Anonymous said...

I really like it. I feel like it's an unexpected picture but in a good way. Shading is amazing. Great job!

Anonymous said...

this is such a good idea! the nose and mouth are very well done, as is the shading. im wondering why you chose to add the shading at the top of the page above the nose though. its a little distracting. amazing job though! i can feel the emotion!

Anonymous said...

this is a cool picture ..i dont think the proportions are exact but work on that next time its aawesome

l'amour said...

I feel like the teeth look weird to me, but that could be just me. but fantastic work