Saturday, September 27, 2008

First piece of the year


Ashley Heffernan

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

I really like how exact you were, the lockers all look pretty much the same. You have great contrast, but not enough shading, the black doesnt fade into the white its just a harsh line. Maybe that was how your picture looked, if so never mind. Good Job.

Anonymous said...

the exact demensions and similarity is really nice that is something that can make or break it but you did a really nice job. but i do feel that the shading is too harsh and some harsh lines and not a reall shade change. but other than that it was really good.

Anonymous said...

very good shading, very precise! but i feel that the picture itself is a little too simple.

Anonymous said...

i love the gauche, i think you used it really well and that the image is very clear and realistic.

Anonymous said...

Great shading and I like how precise you were. The simplicity of the picture makes it stand out.

Anonymous said...

I feel like some of the lines should be more straight and more similar to the other ones. Other than that good job

Anonymous said...

this is nicely done! i liked the severe contrast of the lines, but i felt that they could have been a bit more exact to add to the rigid feeling of the lockers. i like your perspective though. good job!

Anonymous said...

the pattern is good because it is so exact.. the contrast between black and white is good too

l'amour said...

the work is good, you draw well. it shows skill, but I feel like it's a dull picture.