My concentration is the day in the life of a Marshalls employee. I chose to draw the timeclock because that is the most important thing I do, punch in and out.
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I like your theme and your subject. I think the numbers may have stood out a little more if the gradient was darker.
Awesome topic! And I really like the timeclock as a subject- it's sort of like someone took a snapshot of the real world through their eyes. My only complaint is the lack of contrast and the way the numbers are drawn- they seem more like neat handwriting than text on a screen, however, everything else in this pulls me toward it. Really great work!
haha i love your topic! i like the close perspective you used also but your lines could have been a bit more exact i think. other than that tho nicely done!
My concentration is the day in the life of a Marshalls employee. I chose to draw the timeclock because that is the most important thing I do, punch in and out.
9 comments:
I like your theme and your subject. I think the numbers may have stood out a little more if the gradient was darker.
I really like your idea and drawing. I feel like a few more of the details in the drawing could have been more sharp but other than that great job!
good shading, very precise work! i love your concentration, but i think you could take more risks with it
Awesome topic! And I really like the timeclock as a subject- it's sort of like someone took a snapshot of the real world through their eyes. My only complaint is the lack of contrast and the way the numbers are drawn- they seem more like neat handwriting than text on a screen, however, everything else in this pulls me toward it. Really great work!
your concept is so great, I love it. great drawing!
haha i love your topic! i like the close perspective you used also but your lines could have been a bit more exact i think. other than that tho nicely done!
i really like your concentration topic!! the timeclock was a great choice. i love the detail the whole concept really got me
i think its really pretty and great detail
i like your overal concept but it looks a little rushed to me. close up i can see your mistakes. but i think the shading is super.
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