This is a great subject, though I think it requires more shading. It doesn't seem to be very realistic due to the uneven contours of the signs and their handwritten letters- although, they could be like that in reality and I'm simply wrong. This is good example of your concentration, and the median between the two doors is nicely done.
i have to say it was the angle that cought my attention i don't know why but i like it any who. the light coming throught the center was a nice focus and very realistic. the letter i think could be more precise everything else is soo precise and clean cut it kind of thought it off
i like this peice. Good contrast, and good focus. I really like the concept of in and out, and think it really applies to highschool and life in general. I think your shading and precision could be improved upon, but overall I really like it. Good Job : )
this is a great idea! your shading is very nice. the lines on the circle an windows however could be more exact to make it look even more realistic. nice work!
i really like this because it looks realistic , the black makes the doors stand out. one thing you could have worked on was the lettering, making that look realistic also.
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This is a great subject, though I think it requires more shading. It doesn't seem to be very realistic due to the uneven contours of the signs and their handwritten letters- although, they could be like that in reality and I'm simply wrong. This is good example of your concentration, and the median between the two doors is nicely done.
i think the shading is good but more work needs to be done on the letters
i have to say it was the angle that cought my attention i don't know why but i like it any who. the light coming throught the center was a nice focus and very realistic. the letter i think could be more precise everything else is soo precise and clean cut it kind of thought it off
it's a great picture, and great idea. but I feel like you may have rushed the letters? they look like you didn't spend a lot of time on that area.
Great subject. I think the letters could have been done a little better but the shading is very good.
i like this peice. Good contrast, and good focus. I really like the concept of in and out, and think it really applies to highschool and life in general. I think your shading and precision could be improved upon, but overall I really like it. Good Job : )
I love the black and white dimension, good job!
i feel like the letters could have been done better. and the circle underneath the in sign could have been a bit more clean. cool idea!
i like the subject of this. the letters are a little uneven but the overall product is really good. i like it a lot
this is a great idea! your shading is very nice. the lines on the circle an windows however could be more exact to make it look even more realistic. nice work!
i really like this because it looks realistic , the black makes the doors stand out. one thing you could have worked on was the lettering, making that look realistic also.
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