This is the compactor in the backroom where we put all of the boxes and trash.
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More shading could have made this more realistic- also, the text looks more like handwriting than printed letters (case in point: the lowercase n in 'one'), however, the erased area in the bottom right section are a curious detail that I like. Besides the text, the only thing I can criticize is that the coloring is too medium- a little bit of artistic license could be taken to create more contrast in this piece. Good work overall.
the shading could have gone a little darker or lighter in some spots even though i don't know the picture you used. i think more variation in shadding could have made the compactor look mor realistic. the other thing that caught my eye was the letter i think more etail could have gone into them. other than that i think over all good work!
i like your shadding, but i wish your lines were straighter. i dont like the look of ruler lines but i think your lines are a little bit to uneven. but i think you have a good idea
This is the compactor in the backroom where we put all of the boxes and trash.
7 comments:
More shading could have made this more realistic- also, the text looks more like handwriting than printed letters (case in point: the lowercase n in 'one'), however, the erased area in the bottom right section are a curious detail that I like. Besides the text, the only thing I can criticize is that the coloring is too medium- a little bit of artistic license could be taken to create more contrast in this piece. Good work overall.
the shading could have gone a little darker or lighter in some spots even though i don't know the picture you used. i think more variation in shadding could have made the compactor look mor realistic. the other thing that caught my eye was the letter i think more etail could have gone into them. other than that i think over all good work!
i like your shadding, but i wish your lines were straighter. i dont like the look of ruler lines but i think your lines are a little bit to uneven. but i think you have a good idea
I think the shading could have been touched up a little. Great thought though!
this is nicely done! i like your choice of subject. the letters on the signs could be a bit more uniform, but the shading is nicely done. good work!
i like the shading and the dark lines. it makes it look really defined.
im not exactly sure about this one because i agree there could have been more shading and this piece could have looked more realistic
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