What the thing I like most about this piece is how the string, is kept as the focus and as your shadow. The only thing to do this piece is clean up the lines in boxes 2nd one in 1st and 3rd row and the last box in the middle. The piece over all is good.
good choice of color, but i'm not sure if i see a theme in this one. it seems as though they are just random shapes put together. i do love the shadowed string, all you need to do is just clean it up a bit.
The colors really pop and are amazing in this piece, and I also like the simplicity or the theme. But I just don't understand the placement of the boxes. I think it would have looked better as a 16 box rather than 12.
I love your colors and the drawing itself is really good but I don't really understand what it was supposed to be. I also can't really see the shadow shape.
good choice of colors, they really pop out at me, and the shadow of the string looks good even though it is a very fine line. however, i agree that you should have maybe tried to do 16 boxes. the placement that you have looks kinda awkward.
I really like the choice of colors here. But I do feel that the piece could have stood out more if it was a bit cleaner and maybe if the shadow shape was just a little bit thicker, or if not thicker then darker so it doesnt get as lost.
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you chose the colors so well, they really pop when i look at it
the shadow shape could of been a little more noticeable
What the thing I like most about this piece is how the string, is kept as the focus and as your shadow. The only thing to do this piece is clean up the lines in boxes 2nd one in 1st and 3rd row and the last box in the middle. The piece over all is good.
Good work :)
i like the colors that u chose.
i wish the shadow shape could be darker.
i dont see what each box means.
good choice of color, but i'm not sure if i see a theme in this one. it seems as though they are just random shapes put together. i do love the shadowed string, all you need to do is just clean it up a bit.
The colors really pop and are amazing in this piece, and I also like the simplicity or the theme. But I just don't understand the placement of the boxes. I think it would have looked better as a 16 box rather than 12.
I love your colors and the drawing itself is really good but I don't really understand what it was supposed to be. I also can't really see the shadow shape.
i think the shadow shape needs to stick out some more but i really like your colors
good choice of colors, they really pop out at me, and the shadow of the string looks good even though it is a very fine line. however, i agree that you should have maybe tried to do 16 boxes. the placement that you have looks kinda awkward.
I really like the choice of colors here. But I do feel that the piece could have stood out more if it was a bit cleaner and maybe if the shadow shape was just a little bit thicker, or if not thicker then darker so it doesnt get as lost.
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